tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6405702212063448059.post7287483211845196371..comments2023-02-26T03:59:03.645-08:00Comments on Image Motion Experience: Mobster Kane Intro scene/backgroundCesarehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06733952876091944642noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6405702212063448059.post-47749940290773926232009-12-15T06:51:40.834-08:002009-12-15T06:51:40.834-08:00Hey Dirk, I like your design for the background, i...Hey Dirk, I like your design for the background, it is a good idea to make it wider, add on both sides some more floor and columns, so that you may use different portions (see horizontal pan) in your animation, I would add the door where the character comes in, as far as I remember from your sb, and check the perspective, the shadows of the columns seem to go another direction than the rest. Also you've lost a little the high ceiling feeling from your previous storybaord, the collage version, maybe the point of view needs to be lowered a bit, so is the floor, to add space to your room. I will be interested to see how you develop this style, at the moment the lines and b/w make me think more of an african print than a film noir, but hey, mafia is everywhere right? ;) A word of advice, keep everything in layers, is then easier to change things...Davoliohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09788805189567471758noreply@blogger.com